But here I am sitting at work and am looking out of my window. The skies are grey n cloudy, the wind is nice n chilly, the trees sway gently and the birds chirp sweetly....Wow!! what a day...
I cant believe I am in the middle of summer. My only wish is I want to go out for a picnic or something...rather than working..Let me see..atleast I can imagine a picnic!!
I am going for a l
ong drive to ECR,. with a couple of my friends. We come to this beautiful clearing where we could see the beach..surrounded by casurina trees! We park the car and start walking to the beach..The wind is hitting gently on our faces, and we all enjoy it! We sit on the shore watching the waves hit the shore...The scene is so beautiful that I run to play in the water... My friends joined me too n we play like kids... Fully soaked and salty we come out and lie all exhausted on the shore,..looking up at the skies, a drop of rain falls on me, Whoa!!!! It starts to drizzle... n we start running towards the grove and it starts raining heavily!
All excited, I look out of my window... all is still, the trees,no birds flying........ and NO RAIN as yet!! As said earlier I can just imagine...
I cant believe I am in the middle of summer. My only wish is I want to go out for a picnic or something...rather than working..Let me see..atleast I can imagine a picnic!!
I am going for a l
ong drive to ECR,. with a couple of my friends. We come to this beautiful clearing where we could see the beach..surrounded by casurina trees! We park the car and start walking to the beach..The wind is hitting gently on our faces, and we all enjoy it! We sit on the shore watching the waves hit the shore...The scene is so beautiful that I run to play in the water... My friends joined me too n we play like kids... Fully soaked and salty we come out and lie all exhausted on the shore,..looking up at the skies, a drop of rain falls on me, Whoa!!!! It starts to drizzle... n we start running towards the grove and it starts raining heavily!All excited, I look out of my window... all is still, the trees,no birds flying........ and NO RAIN as yet!! As said earlier I can just imagine...
5 comments:
I am proud of you! You have mostly used complete words, capitalized beginnning of sentences, and used punctuations. Way to go!
It would be better still if you can make paragraphs and don't overdo punctuations................... :)
hahaha.Its because I was thinking about you when I started off! Thanks to you.hehehe!
Is the punctuations better now? lol!
today a friend of mine received a scrap on orkut, that TOTALLY cracked me up :
"hey hi do u wanna b frenz is it k"
LOL.
sorry, bungi's speculation on the punctuations made me think bout it :P
am not talking about YOUR punctuations but. good writing, Deepa. nice first few posts :) keep them coming!
Hahaha...Thanks man.Must say typin sms's realy ruins d way u write!!! wat ya say amanda.... hehehehe!!!!
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